Monday, 13 May 2013

100 Word Challenge #30 Danny

Ark Angel
I liked ark angel because it was about a teenage super spy, who after saving the 3rd richest man in the world's son from Eco-terrorists, is invited to stay with him. But he finds out that he is trying to bomb the first ever space hotel. And when he attempts to kill him many times, Alex Rider is forced into action once again. Ark angel is full of suspense that will have you on the edge of your seats all the way through and, if its thrills you seek, then read ark angel.

100 Word Challenge #30 - Seth

The Hobbit : Chapter 18

As the goblins and the wargs approached the brisk of the valley, Gandalf spoke . . . " The battle of five armies has begun!" First, the elvish spearman attacked from the east side of the mountain. The goblins that were riding the wargs charged from the top of the valley fiercely. Many arrows were shot from the goblins in the northern area of the mountain. Suddenly, the goblins retreated back to the bottom of the valley. Next, the army of dwarves led by Dain (A cousin of Thorin) charged at the goblin sword-men. But only to find out that the goblins were joined by yet more goblins and wargs.


100 word challenge #30-Kifayat

Ark Angel

I like Ark Angel because the main character called Alex Rider has a amazing personality. He is a secret agent working for MI6. He killed the biggest criminal in the world. The book has a lot of action and killing. The MI6 try catching a multi-million air who kills anyone who gets in his way. He made a hotel in space and is plotting to bomb it so it falls down on Washington and all the evidence gets destroyed. The criminal was so evil he planned to cut his son's finger! Alex and the MI6 must stop him, fast.

100 word challenge#30 Laurel

Double Act
Double Act is about some twins that don't look like each other or like doing the same things as each other. One day something comes up that is on both of there minds but there dad doesn't want them to go. So they escape but when they get there do they both like it or do they think that it's something neither of them really like to do. There's dancing that Ruby doesn't like and singing and talking infront of lot's of people that Garnet is shy of. If you would like to be a twin this is the perfect book for you.


Sunday, 12 May 2013

100 Word Challenge


Watch this space.  We will be entering the 100WC this week!



Friday, 10 May 2013

Persuasive Podcasts

Year four have been creating podcasts based around persuation linking to Charlie and the chocolate factory. We have all chosen who we are persuading and there is a mix between convinsing the golden ticket winners to steal the new everlasting gobstopper and to not steal the everlasting gobstoppers.



Kifayat And Danny from J szyndler on Vimeo.
 
Slugworth Charlie And Chocolate Factory from J szyndler on Vimeo.




 
William Kyle My Project from J szyndler on Vimeo.



 
Isra Slug worth from J szyndler on Vimeo.


 
Mike Tv Sundus And Chole from J szyndler on Vimeo.


Jayden And Kyle Slug Worth And Augusta Gloop from J szyndler on Vimeo.


Tyler And Abby from J szyndler on Vimeo.

My Podcast Text

To argue one side of an issue or dilemma

So Augustus Gloop I hear you won the golden ticket! If you can help me in a small favour we’ll both be rich! You should sneakily go into the factory and get the everlasting gobstopper and I'll give you all the food you want! But remember, do it sneakily, don't get caught! Go and get the everlasting gobstopper.

Text for my podcast

Here is my text for convincing Mike TV to steal an everlasting gobstopper.


To argue one side or an issue of dilemma

So mike TV you’ve won a golden ticket have you? If you get me an everlasting gobstopper I’ll let you go on TV - If you’re up for the test! And I’ll throw in a real cowboy pistol and I will give it you right after you give me the everlasting gobstopper. Or if you don’t want your gun I will give you 1,000,000 pounds. If you want all this get me the everlasting gobstopper or else if you don’t get it, I will give you nothing.  I will be amazed if you get it for me and I will let you have a 1 year supply of chocolate and the chocolate would be my own everlasting gobstopper. It will be wonderful and it wont be terrible. Trust me it will be the best in the universe.  

Saturday, 4 May 2013

Trampolining and Archery

On Tuesday Year 4 went to Whitley Academy to take part in some trampolining and archery. We had a great time and learned lots of new skills.

Friday, 3 May 2013

Issues and Dilemmas


Created with Padlet


For our Literacy work on issues and dilemmas, we have been looking at the story of Charlie and the Chocolate factory. Charlie and the other characters face many choices in the story, where they have to decide what to do or how they should act.  The results of the choices they make for each of these dilemmas can have positive or negative consequences...

We are just at the beginning of the story, but we will be posting our writing from each of the different characters points of view at the end of next week.