Monday, 13 May 2013

100 word challenge #30-Kifayat

Ark Angel

I like Ark Angel because the main character called Alex Rider has a amazing personality. He is a secret agent working for MI6. He killed the biggest criminal in the world. The book has a lot of action and killing. The MI6 try catching a multi-million air who kills anyone who gets in his way. He made a hotel in space and is plotting to bomb it so it falls down on Washington and all the evidence gets destroyed. The criminal was so evil he planned to cut his son's finger! Alex and the MI6 must stop him, fast.

2 comments:

  1. I love your story it's amazing Kifayat

    (Mandeep)

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  2. Ms Woodgate (Team100WC)19 May 2013 at 10:07

    Hello Kifayat,
    Thank you for entering this week's 100WC. Wow this book sounds amazing, so exciting. You have used very descriptive words and your sentence structure creates tension.
    Think about using some of your exciting word choices for sentence openers too.
    I will be looking out for this book, I think my class would really like it.
    Keep up the good work.

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