Monday, 20 May 2013
100 word challenge #31 Sahill and Mcorley
I was walking through this weird place when I saw a something strange and peculiar. I thought there was something inside. There could have been...thousands of aliens inside this golf ball which smelled horrible. Slowly I touched it. I was frightened. The giant golf ball had big holes on the outside that looked like they were going to pop. I could see the golf ball vibrating quickly. It sounded like a disco inside because it was grooving so much.
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instead of using strange you could just use peculiar. Apart from that your work is awesome!
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