13 years later, I was walking to school, when I bumped into something which felt like a giant golf ball covered in bubble wrap. I looked up it was a giant golf ball covered in bubble wrap. I moved around the peculiar thing. A man pointed at me. I couldn't see through clearly but I knew some one had spotted me. Suddenly a hand pulled me in...
Oh no! what are you going to do! you have been pulled in!
ReplyDeleteDaizy
Hi Kifayat and Eve, I enjoyed reading your 100WC, well done. I particularly liked some of the vocabulary; enormous, unused, peculiar, clearly. I also liked your last sentence, it makes me wonder what happened next.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could try to use a variety of sentence starters to make it even more interesting for your readers. :)