Monday, 20 May 2013

100 word challenge #31 Seth and Daizy

Whenever we go on holiday I always get bored, until today. I was glumly walking down the road when I saw the most peculiar sight. It was there. Right before me. Like a giant ZORG ball. My mouth was wide open. Holding my nose because of it's sincere odour, I was surprised because it did not look as if it would smell, but it did. Just looking at it almost made me faint. This thing looked as if it was from outer space. Maybe it was, I don't know. Slowly, I crept up to it. I know this sounds crazy, but I licked it. It tasted gritty and salty. Suddenly, I heard voices coming from inside the giant bubble wrap. Just at that moment, I spotted a door. I tip-toed inside . . .

3 comments:

  1. Great work Seth and Daizy!
    I want to see what happens!

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  2. I think we did OK but I want to see what we could improve for next time

    Daizy

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  3. Debbie Team 100wc27 May 2013 at 11:19

    Wow Seth and Daizy, what a great descriptive piece! Your use of unusual adjectives was good and gave me a great picture of what you were seeing and feeling. I really want to know what happens next. Well done!

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