The Worst Thing About My Sister
This book is great because two sisters never get along but then something out of the ordinary happens. Marty gets really annoyed with her sister because Melissa (her sister) makes fun of Marty for having cuddly toys when Melissa can't get to sleep without baba (her teddy). So Marty rips up baba so Melissa hurries up the bunk bed ladder but Marty keeps on kicking the ladder the first time nothing happened the second time nothing happened it was as noisy as a tornado. But then suddenly Melissa fell to the ground with a great big thud then Melissa got rushed to hospital.
That's a great explanation of the story, well done.
ReplyDeleteMacey's Mum
Hi Macey-
ReplyDeleteYou explain things really well here, because I haven't read this book, but now think I understand some of the plot. You've made it even clearer with the use of brackets. Good work.
Fiona (Team 100WC)
What a dramatic ending to this extract! I can just imagine the two sisters quarelling and then things getting out of hand. You ended on a good cliffhanger too, as I'm wondering now whether Marty felt sorry for Melissa after she was hurt. Keep up the super writing!
ReplyDeleteMrs Davis (Team 100WC)