Sunday, 19 May 2013
Monday, 13 May 2013
100 Word Challenge Update
Some of the posts have been entered into this week's 100 word challenge. Go to the site to see if yours has been entered.
http://100wc.net/
Also, have a look at other entries and write a constructive comment on the posts to help other children with their writing.
Enjoy!
http://100wc.net/
Also, have a look at other entries and write a constructive comment on the posts to help other children with their writing.
Enjoy!
100 Word challenge # 30 - Isaac Grew
Danny the champion of the world.
Is a fantastic book for people who love adventure.It's about a boy called Danny who lived in a old gypsy caravan with his farther they own a petrol station.One night when Danny went to bed his dad went of to some poaching with out Danny knowing.Danny wake's because of a passing truck he looks up on the bunk on top of him (were his dad sleeps) and he wasn't there so he sat an the step of the gypsy caravan with his blanket and waited for his dad to come back but he didn't very early in the morning.
Is a fantastic book for people who love adventure.It's about a boy called Danny who lived in a old gypsy caravan with his farther they own a petrol station.One night when Danny went to bed his dad went of to some poaching with out Danny knowing.Danny wake's because of a passing truck he looks up on the bunk on top of him (were his dad sleeps) and he wasn't there so he sat an the step of the gypsy caravan with his blanket and waited for his dad to come back but he didn't very early in the morning.
100 word challenge #30 - Macey
The Worst Thing About My Sister
This book is great because two sisters never get along but then something out of the ordinary happens. Marty gets really annoyed with her sister because Melissa (her sister) makes fun of Marty for having cuddly toys when Melissa can't get to sleep without baba (her teddy). So Marty rips up baba so Melissa hurries up the bunk bed ladder but Marty keeps on kicking the ladder the first time nothing happened the second time nothing happened it was as noisy as a tornado. But then suddenly Melissa fell to the ground with a great big thud then Melissa got rushed to hospital.
100 word challenge#30.Sahill
Charlie and Chocolate Factory
If your adore for chocolate then this is the time for you to read this book you'll love it.
A boy called charlie that lived in a little house with a big family he was the little
boy in his house.They were really poor, Charlie goes to school everyday When his class ends they all go to the shop that sells hundreds and hundreds of chocolate called mr willy wonkas chocolates.Charlie doesn't buy chocolate he buys a loaf of bread because he cares abut his family.When he takes it home he gives it to his mother.He gets sick of having his usual dinner.
100 word challenge #30 - Daizy
Harry Potter and the deathly hallows
Harry Potter is a fantastic but scary story about a boy who fights to save. He is a great wizard that lost his nice parents because of an evil killer. He tries to demolish the evil wizard Voldemort and he completes his job. He has two best friends called Ron and Hermione. They try to help Harry on his quest. Harry finds a sword that he needed to get to defeat these evil horcruxes ( voldermort's soul that he put into things that are special to him ) that slow him down on his quest. He never gives up when he loses and gains new friends on the way. They support him even though they might get hurt.
Harry Potter is a fantastic but scary story about a boy who fights to save. He is a great wizard that lost his nice parents because of an evil killer. He tries to demolish the evil wizard Voldemort and he completes his job. He has two best friends called Ron and Hermione. They try to help Harry on his quest. Harry finds a sword that he needed to get to defeat these evil horcruxes ( voldermort's soul that he put into things that are special to him ) that slow him down on his quest. He never gives up when he loses and gains new friends on the way. They support him even though they might get hurt.
100 word count challenge 30 - Duncan
Gangsta Gran.
This book is about a child named Ben and his old smelly gran who has a secret or 2.Bens parents are crazy about Strictly Stars Dancing and every Friday dump ben at his grans house.Then there parents would either go to Strictly Stars Dancing Live,cinema or to a restaurant.Ben would always dash like a beam of light to his room to read is favourite magazine Pluming Weekly.His gran would make him eat wet cabbage soup.He would pour the cabbage soup in his grans Dead plant.When Ben found out his gran was a robber he swore not to tell a single soul.
This book is about a child named Ben and his old smelly gran who has a secret or 2.Bens parents are crazy about Strictly Stars Dancing and every Friday dump ben at his grans house.Then there parents would either go to Strictly Stars Dancing Live,cinema or to a restaurant.Ben would always dash like a beam of light to his room to read is favourite magazine Pluming Weekly.His gran would make him eat wet cabbage soup.He would pour the cabbage soup in his grans Dead plant.When Ben found out his gran was a robber he swore not to tell a single soul.
100 word count challange 30 - William
Ghost Rescue .
When a boy named Charlie went to FairFax castle he met a family (or pack) of very unhappy ghosts.The ghosts get bossed by a woman and she forces the ghosts to sing a horrible song against their will!Can Charlie be able to help all the ghosts that are prisond in FairFax castle and the ghosts need Charlie's help to try and break them free from being prisond forever and ever (and also they want to haunt someplace else than FairFax castle because they are tierd of being bossed about all day every day (inc day + night! But they must be really really annoyed about it!)
When a boy named Charlie went to FairFax castle he met a family (or pack) of very unhappy ghosts.The ghosts get bossed by a woman and she forces the ghosts to sing a horrible song against their will!Can Charlie be able to help all the ghosts that are prisond in FairFax castle and the ghosts need Charlie's help to try and break them free from being prisond forever and ever (and also they want to haunt someplace else than FairFax castle because they are tierd of being bossed about all day every day (inc day + night! But they must be really really annoyed about it!)
100 Word Challenge #30 Danny
Ark Angel
I liked ark angel because it was about a teenage super spy, who after saving the 3rd richest man in the world's son from Eco-terrorists, is invited to stay with him. But he finds out that he is trying to bomb the first ever space hotel. And when he attempts to kill him many times, Alex Rider is forced into action once again. Ark angel is full of suspense that will have you on the edge of your seats all the way through and, if its thrills you seek, then read ark angel.
100 Word Challenge #30 - Seth
The Hobbit : Chapter 18
As the goblins and the wargs approached the brisk of the valley, Gandalf spoke . . . " The battle of five armies has begun!" First, the elvish spearman attacked from the east side of the mountain. The goblins that were riding the wargs charged from the top of the valley fiercely. Many arrows were shot from the goblins in the northern area of the mountain. Suddenly, the goblins retreated back to the bottom of the valley. Next, the army of dwarves led by Dain (A cousin of Thorin) charged at the goblin sword-men. But only to find out that the goblins were joined by yet more goblins and wargs.
As the goblins and the wargs approached the brisk of the valley, Gandalf spoke . . . " The battle of five armies has begun!" First, the elvish spearman attacked from the east side of the mountain. The goblins that were riding the wargs charged from the top of the valley fiercely. Many arrows were shot from the goblins in the northern area of the mountain. Suddenly, the goblins retreated back to the bottom of the valley. Next, the army of dwarves led by Dain (A cousin of Thorin) charged at the goblin sword-men. But only to find out that the goblins were joined by yet more goblins and wargs.
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