Monday, 20 May 2013

100 word challenge #31 Isaac William

Long ago a UFO crash landed and split into 3 pieces and its now a place where scientists do a lot of experiments to make humans  as quick as lightning disappear.Its really  like a 3 domed golf ball but anyway I couldn't believe the next thing and that is it looks like bubble rap too the bubbles were in the shape of hexagons  it looked as if it was almost see through but when people looked in it was blurred.The golf ball stunk of rotten beef but it was wobbling side to side and up and down like there was a disco.

100 word challenge#31 Duncan & Danny

Area 51

 A few thousand years ago an alien space craft crash landed in Arizona so,the government built a secret base to experiment on the space craft. 
It has been there for that long and still only the government know what it is. It is made from super sticky bubble wrap to stop anyone getting out or getting in. It was in the shape of 3 chopped golf balls and smelt like chicken nuggets. If you try to look in you will not see a thing because the bubbles in the bubble wrap are made of dark tinted glass but the scientists inside can see you. 
Yes my friend this is Area 51!

 




100 word challenge #31 Seth and Daizy

Whenever we go on holiday I always get bored, until today. I was glumly walking down the road when I saw the most peculiar sight. It was there. Right before me. Like a giant ZORG ball. My mouth was wide open. Holding my nose because of it's sincere odour, I was surprised because it did not look as if it would smell, but it did. Just looking at it almost made me faint. This thing looked as if it was from outer space. Maybe it was, I don't know. Slowly, I crept up to it. I know this sounds crazy, but I licked it. It tasted gritty and salty. Suddenly, I heard voices coming from inside the giant bubble wrap. Just at that moment, I spotted a door. I tip-toed inside . . .

Monday, 13 May 2013

100 Word Challenge Update

Some of the posts have been entered into this week's 100 word challenge.  Go to the site to see if yours has been entered.

http://100wc.net/

Also, have a look at other entries and write a constructive comment on the posts to help other children with their writing.

Enjoy!


100 Word challenge # 30 - Isaac Grew

                                                       Danny the champion of the world.


Is a fantastic book for people who love adventure.It's about a boy called Danny who lived in a old gypsy caravan with his farther they own a petrol station.One night when Danny went to bed his dad went of to some poaching with out Danny knowing.Danny wake's because of a passing truck  he looks up on the bunk on top of him (were his dad sleeps) and he wasn't there so he sat an the step of the gypsy caravan with his blanket and waited for his dad to come back but he didn't very early in the morning.

100 word challenge #30 - Macey

 The Worst Thing About My Sister

This book is great because two sisters never get along but then something out of the ordinary happens. Marty gets really annoyed with her sister because Melissa (her sister) makes fun of Marty for having cuddly toys when Melissa can't get to sleep without baba (her teddy). So Marty rips up baba so Melissa hurries up the bunk bed ladder but Marty keeps on kicking the ladder the first time nothing happened the second time nothing happened it was as noisy as a tornado. But then suddenly Melissa fell to the ground with a great big thud then Melissa got  rushed to hospital. 

100 word challenge#30.Sahill

Charlie and Chocolate Factory


If your adore for chocolate then this is the time for you to read this book you'll love it.
A boy called charlie that lived in a little house with a big family he was the little 
boy in his house.They were really poor, Charlie goes to school everyday When his class ends they all go to the shop that sells hundreds and hundreds of chocolate called mr willy wonkas chocolates.Charlie doesn't buy chocolate he buys a loaf of bread because he      cares abut his family.When he takes it home he gives it to his mother.He gets sick of having his usual dinner.

100 word challenge #30 - Daizy

 Harry Potter and the deathly hallows

Harry Potter is a fantastic but scary story about a boy who fights to save. He is a great wizard that lost his  nice parents because of an evil killer. He tries to demolish the evil wizard Voldemort and he completes his job. He has two best friends called Ron and Hermione. They try to help Harry on his quest. Harry finds a sword that he needed to get to defeat these evil  horcruxes ( voldermort's soul that he put into things that are special to him ) that slow him down on his quest. He never gives up when he loses and gains new friends on the way. They support him  even though they might get hurt.


100 word count challenge 30 - Duncan

Gangsta Gran.

This book is about a child named Ben and his old smelly gran who has a secret or 2.Bens parents are crazy about Strictly Stars Dancing and every Friday dump ben at his grans house.Then there parents would either go to Strictly Stars Dancing Live,cinema or to a restaurant.Ben would always dash like a beam of light to his room to read is favourite magazine Pluming Weekly.His gran would make him eat  wet cabbage soup.He would pour the cabbage soup in his grans Dead plant.When Ben found out his gran was a robber he swore not to tell a single soul.