Monday 20 May 2013
100 word challenge #31 Laurel and Euan
We were just walking down the old cracked road when we came across something strange and weird.It looked liked massive pieces of bubble wrap that you could pop.What was it? Was it an alien camp or what? Inside there must be alien's feeding on humans - better not get to close. What if something good was going to happen though? Oh let's just push it to the back of our minds. It was suddenly really hot. Let's eat some blueberries and hopefully it will cool us down. "It smells like muddy bombs round here" we thought.
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Hello Laurel and Euan.
ReplyDeleteGreat 100wc. I liked the fact that you included lots of questions, this really helps the reader to picture what the 'massive pieces of bubble wrap' was.
I know you had a 100 word limit but try to use less questions and use the words left over to finish the challenge because you have left your story on an open cliff hanger.
Even though you could of used less questions and more description at the end the whole 100wc its self is very good.
Well Done
Sophie Leach 100WC Team
http://y6pewithall.primaryblogger.co.uk/
I have really enjoyed reading you work guys! I like the phrase ' Let's push it to the back of our minds'
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to reading your next pice! :D