The secret caterpillar
Long, long ago a shower of bubble wrap came down to England and made a big dome. But what I never realised was that when I walked to it, it looked like half of a giant caterpillar. At first because it was made of bubble wrap, it looked like I could pop it. It smelt like a world of caterpillars. It felt like a big hard piece of bubble wrap. The air tasted of chocolate bubble-gum. I could hear people screaming inside of the dome. That was when...
i think we have done well but i think i would like some advice from others.
ReplyDeletemacey
Buble rap caterpiller, cool!
ReplyDeleteHello Macey and Libby,
ReplyDeleteGreat work entering this week's 100WC. You have created a really imaginative piece of writing, I like the different sentence openers you have chosen. It is also good how you have used different senses in your description. The air smelling of bubble gum would be wonderful.
Next time think of different ways to name the object you are describing, as you called it bubble wrap three times.
Keep up the good work.